We have established in our group that we need to improve the:
- music
- titles
- camera movement
- length
- acting
- sound
First Draft Feedback
Today we received the feedback about our first draft. Overall, there was a wide range of different opinions.
We have established in our group that we need to improve the:
Below are some images we have taken of three of our feedback sheets. Looking through them all we found that a lot of people did not understand our film opening. Because of this we have decided to create scenes which show more clearly what the film is about. Due to this only being our first draft we knew some aspects were not perfected, like the shakiness of the camera at the end. We did not have time to re-film this so decided we would perfect of change this after our first draft was submitted.
We have established in our group that we need to improve the: